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Suffer
Contributed by
Greg_Skellington
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 02:39:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She dances forever in her icy fortress,
It's hard not to slip and hit the floor.
She's getting colder,
Too cold to even hold her.
Her black, icy heart, screams in pain.
Fear of the lonliness,
Her true love brought her.
And now she's swimming in a pool of darkness.
It's slowly pulling her under.
She yells for help,
But nobody wants to hear it.
She slowly gives in to the feelings that lie beneath the water line.
The water fills her lungs,
And only I can see her drowning.
She cant see me,
For I am hidden in the shadows cast by the moon,
Shes at the boundry now,
The boundry of Light and Darkness.
I could have saved her.
But why should I?
She would've watched me die.
This is the pain that she caused me.
Now it's her turn to Suffer.
Copyright ©
Greg_Skellington
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2005-02-22 14:39:02]
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Re: Suffer
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 02:51:33 PM AEST
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this is a very great poem that shows some string emotion...the descriptions are nice i like how u show your emotions and it rhmes and makes sense
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