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please
Contributed by
reprobate
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A package with such lovely wrapping
Features that elicit praise and garner wishes
Real easy on the eye is the catch-phrase here
Yet there you are, in MY pretty, very ugly
Worn and tattered, this box doesn't belong
Not quite reaching a point of desire or even need
Ew, look, oh my god are the now too loud whispers
And here I am, in your loathing, only lonely
A mind so closed, a black hole for understanding
Can't take a chance on being wrong; to stop the hurt
A mouthful of marrow-seeking barbs fly free
Your eyes just won't ever let your heart see
Though the stares stab at who I am or could be
Silence is how I respond to all the anger
Words strip my flesh, shred my soul
I am not a freak for banishing your bored amusement
I try not to stumble when passing near
My face hidden to cover my tears of shameful pain
I promise not to drown anyone with them
Just stop reminding me of my not fitting in
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reprobate
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Re: please
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:55:34 PM AEST
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| there were really only two lines of this that i think should have been left you, but that was just because they kind of changed the tone of it a bit. i loved your poem though. it was actually worth my attention span, while most of the ones here arent even worth a glance over. |
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