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We All Fall ... down
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:48:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Delicate and beautiful
.....Too good
Held with tender eyes
.....So sweet
Every dawn celebrated
.....Only love
Nature abhors a vacuum
.....Too stagnant
The night smirks and mocks
.....So long
We too shall be
.....No more
Fingers clutch futilely
.....Too sad
Our light fades
.....So bad
Nowhere to go
.....Goodbye
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2005-02-22 15:48:41]
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Re: We All Fall ... down
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:52:29 PM AEST
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| a pretty fast pace poem. when i first saw this format, i was afraid it would be one of the annoyingly redundant ones, im glad that i was surprised by the fact that it is not. i like the fact that you know how to spell, i do not see it in many here. i think this format worked pretty well for what you were aiming for. |
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