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Six Little Cuts
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:58:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Six little cuts
My salvation,
My doom,
In one package of temptation
And a world of gloom.
Six little cuts
My secret love
My dreaded hurt,
This is no dove,
Its a time to be alert.
Six little cuts
My inside smile,
My outside tears
Its not worthwhile,
It brings no true cheers.
Six little cuts
Shining on my arm
A bright, beautiful red
This is the reason for the harm,
Though it may leave me dead.
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Live2Die
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2005-02-22 22:58:39]
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Re: Six Little Cuts
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by LadyWynter on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:08:07 PM AEST
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I'm a cutter, so I really related to this piece. I know many people don't understand why we do the things we do, hang in there sweetie. I know it's hard, but times will get better.
*Hugs*
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Re: Six Little Cuts
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:45:10 AM AEST
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sad and dark write, expressed well,
pix xx |
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Re: Six Little Cuts
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:13:50 PM AEST
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| Excellent! depressing, but excellently expressed!good job on this one marissa |
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Re: Six Little Cuts
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by iluvpencils on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:23:33 AM AEST
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| I love this. I can really relate. There's something about cutting in a row, yknow all lined up, that is described perfectly in the phrase "six little cuts." What can I say? I loved it. Thanks for your comment. |
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