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Masterpiece of Blood
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:39:45 PM in AEST
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Masterpiece of Blood
Your blood drips onto the page artistically
Drip on me the same way
Because I want your blood
Porque yo quiero la sangre
The ink cannot be discerned from the black paper
That was written on by the poetic raper
That didn't use ink
Que no usa la tinta
It is no longer the same
Tainted red with life's waste
It's black and red
Es negra y roja
I want your blood
No longer
Yo no quiero la sangre
Porque t eres nadie
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2005-02-22 23:39:45]
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Re: Masterpiece of Blood
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:42:37 PM AEST
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I really like this...its a good poem, but the Spanish is confusing...
~ Marissa |
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Re: Masterpiece of Blood
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by Les4567 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:47:18 PM AEST
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I like this poem alot
I also like the fact that you used spanish.
For once it helped that i took spanish...lol
Good write only true talent can mix languages and still have an amazing poem.
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Re: Masterpiece of Blood
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:47:35 PM AEST
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Hmmm.....People
Great poem I think the spanish is a use of something I dont see around here Jennifer...great job
Clark |
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Re: Masterpiece of Blood
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 06:38:05 AM AEST
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| What an amazing poem!..very brilliant...a true masterpiece.:-) venkat |
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Re: Masterpiece of Blood
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 08:29:24 PM AEST
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| Awesome writing, done with perfection right from the start. Excellent job |
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