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Fallen Angels
Contributed by
sojourner
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:14:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Fallen from grace innocence gone knowing not now where I belong
For the ways of the world I did embrace
Within my mind the beauty of innocence soon was erased
Pleasurable were the sins of earthly desires as I plunged pell mell into the dancing fires
This road, that I had now taken strewn,with fallen angels their innocence, forsaken
In the frenzied fires of passion and desire souls consumed,the flames grow higher
No yesterday,nor tomorrow only the now as to the goddess of lust we all did bow
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2005-02-23 00:14:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fallen Angels
(User Rating: 1 ) by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:47:36 AM AEST (User
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Woah. I really like this....its a vey good poem, and it just paints such a visual in my mind...
~ Marissa |
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Re: Fallen Angels
(User Rating: 1 ) by mypetmeatball on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 01:11:29 AM AEST (User
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I love this poem. A very complete piece.
And yes, I succumb to the demon of lust often. gasp. |
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Re: Fallen Angels
(User Rating: 1 ) by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 02:09:31 AM AEST (User
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I absolutely loved this poem. It was brilliant. Something was telling me to go to YPDC, i now see why. I relate to this poem so well. I couldn't of said it better myself if i tried. Lust seems to take control of many people, including me.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Fallen Angels
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 04:52:05 AM AEST (User
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Great writing but not all of us do but Probably have in past times.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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