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the girl with a pair of beautiful blank eyes- (sonnet)
Contributed by
mysonnet
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 01:30:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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her eyes were big but they were blank
she longs to blink, without restricts
the world to her, is being frank
but it was nothing more than the word "deceit"
she still awaits his loving arms
that'll carefully embrace her dim hopes high
she waits patiently for the graceful charm
but as more time flies; her hopes will die.
no time to lose nor time to spare
her feeling's brittle; like paper that tears
she just want him to look at her
and wish that the moment could last forever
but when she wakes up from her dream
will she ever remember him?
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mysonnet
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2005-02-23 01:30:23]
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Re: the girl with a pair of beautiful blank eyes- (sonnet)
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 01:55:34 AM AEST
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Very beautiful write.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: the girl with a pair of beautiful blank eyes- (sonnet)
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 02:58:55 AM AEST
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A nicely done poem filled with so much thought to it.
Great write, keep them coming.
Jane ;-) |
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Re: the girl with a pair of beautiful blank eyes- (sonnet)
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:41:11 AM AEST
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very good, moving poem
pix xx |
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