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Naked
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:05:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Her nakedness warm
Watching eyes hot for her with
Lust, craving with thoughts.
Copyright ©
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2005-02-23 07:05:09]
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Re: Naked
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by Neil on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:26:49 AM AEST
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You are right..they are very similar. We live with these thoughts and most of the time we don't get to act on them.
Well done...Neil |
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Re: Naked
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:01:49 AM AEST
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Im not good at haikus, but this was really good. I got what you meant in just a short line. Well done.
Jane ;-) |
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Re: Naked
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:35:47 AM AEST
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I cant write haikus either but I loved that
pix xx |
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Re: Naked
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 05:12:09 PM AEST
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| Short, sweet, and to the point without a hint of sleaze. |
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