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Drunk On Depression
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:08:04 PM in AEST
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I drink it down it burns my throat,
On my hymn sheet it strikes the lowest note,
As I swim around in this big, dark pool,
Everyone hates me & everybodys cruel.
I am daily intoxicated by this force,
I am rendered helpless until it runs its course,
It takes me down into the perils of death,
Hacking away until there isnt anything left.
I stumble like that of a drunk,
Deep into the darkness I have sunk,
I look up right up to the falling sky,
Im drunk on depression I can not lie.
There is only room for me in this bar,
All whom I love feel so very far,
I say I am happy so they do not worry,
I can feel as inside me alcoholic misery scurries.
The large glass in which I swim,
Is filled with pain right up to its brim,
Although physically I am stone cold sober,
The emotional drunkenness of depression washes over.
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pixie
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2005-02-23 12:08:04]
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Re: Drunk On Depression
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:18:49 PM AEST
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Now Krissie...
You said that this isn't good. Now imagine my surprise when I looked and there was this fabulous poem here.
(Not that I was really surprised, I knew it would be great)
Honestly hun. I wouldn't change a thing about this.
Well done getting emotions on a page so well once again.
*huggies* Phil xxx |
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Re: Drunk On Depression
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:35:48 PM AEST
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Krisse,
You always let your soul shine through your writes and this is no exception.
There 's some darkness there, but it is truely beautiful. |
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Re: Drunk On Depression
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:48:41 PM AEST
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i can relate to this so much (at one time) it is a wonderful sad poem beautifly written depression is a silent killer dont let it win
michelle |
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Re: Drunk On Depression
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 02:45:39 PM AEST
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| So many people suffer from depression, and you have found a way to let it out. I hope others find and read this poem, it can only help them learn how to deal. |
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Re: Drunk On Depression
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:57:38 AM AEST
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That wa really sadening Kriss, it was writen so well and the ryming was perfect.
Well done.
Jane ;-) |
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Re: Drunk On Depression
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:31:15 PM AEST
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Those dark clouds some times don't wanna leave.
A wonderful description of depression.. can relate
(((HUGS)))
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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