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Time gose bye
Contributed by
spooky
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Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time goes bye fast,,,
as we watch the hands move slowly,,
each minute,,every second,,
On the hour ,,Another hour goes bye,,,
Family members pass away,,
we dont even know the minute or the second,
for we try to embrace the moment,
that we had with them,,
every tear we shed, one second goes bye,,
who's counting,,,,
Time goes bye fast,,,
as we watch the love we have goes bye,,
like seconds,,
do you remember the second when you told them that ,, you LOVED THEM ?
Try now before it's to late,,to remember,,
do you know the minute or the second now !
even the hour when you said I LOVE YOU to anyone?
'I DO, IT'S NOW 5:51:13sec, pm,,I love you too,,,
craig s. meeks
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2002-12-14 04:00:00]
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Re: Time gose bye
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by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 04:19:12 AM AEST
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| True true, we have to make the most of our time by not forgetting to say I love you.Nice poem,I did enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Time gose bye
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by OreO on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 01:34:05 PM AEST
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Ok you are reading my mind now....i have said this soooooo many times it's not even funny, Time is such an important factor in so many things, one's life can be taken in a split second and the chance to be with the love of your life is gone.......or the chance to say i love you to someone you love is gone....time is everything......and i beleive people need to stop being fake and let their fears go in order to find the happiness that they want......thanks for sharing this one i could go on and on about the subject Time lol...this is a beautiful write...
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