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Angel...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:33:23 PM in AEST
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Crystalline skies, smiling sun,
She waits for me in her sea of blue with open arms
I wish to fly to her,
Spread my wings and receive her warm embrace
Yet, I am forever bound to these chains
Wings stripped from me so long ago, by some ungrateful father,
I remember now, as he smiles that devils grin
I yearn to recline on a marshmallow cloud,
Bask in splendid light, abandon this horrid morbidity,
And begin to live a free existence
Yet, here I am,
Encompassed in my own crimson essence,
Dyingever so slowlyof this dagger in my heart
The hilt starts a dance of repetition,
Imitating my ragged breaths in perfect unison
Death hovering over me now, mocking with a bony finger,
And I wonder if he will take me this time
Deprived of innocence, fallen from grace,
Results of sinful desire, unmasked face
The truth has been revealed,
Theres more to me than meets the eye,
I can honestly say that Im not an angel when I die
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FleurdeSang
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Re: Angel...
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:40:18 PM AEST
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woah....I really like this. It's so graphic, and sends so many pictures into the mind. A truly wonderful poem...
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Re: Angel...
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:54:46 PM AEST
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The sins of the Father are just that. they are non transferable. His actions may have affected who you have become ... but not what you will become ...
l'ange, fleur, a répandu vos ailes et vole... devenu que vous êtes né en ce monde, pas ce que ce monde a fait à vous
Beautiful in a rather somber way, Stephy.
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Re: Angel...
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:40:42 AM AEST
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(((((((( 4 FleurdeSang ))))))) wish u well
sweetie . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Angel...
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:20:43 PM AEST
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I find this piece beautiful and kinda sad. .
I really liked it alot. |
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Re: Angel...
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:22:13 PM AEST
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I yearn to recline on a marshmallow cloud,
Bask in splendid light, abandon this horrid morbidity,
And begin to live… a free existence…
And you will be free from the chains that bind your heart..Do not let it imprison your thoughts.
You have so much love inside of you
I can see the beauty that shines.
Much love sent your way
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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