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Words cannot describe...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:45:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A divinity that no other possessed,
I was truly the Mistress of the art of words then
A quiet shadow near the corner of my mind,
Desolate, mysterious, obscure
Just one word has left my hand shivering,
My pen abandoned and crying ebony tears
A single syllable has left me trembling,
Yearning for a love that is forbidden
And my heart aches, weeping for a healing caress,
To feel the touch of love that had been deprived of me so long ago
I try again,
Recreating the images my lovely Luna had sacrificed for me
But everything links to you
All there isis you
The quill falls powerless from my shuddering hands,
Your name as text, a bittersweet hymn to my tattered heart
And I, once the great weaver of beautiful expressions,
Have become a useless poetess with only silence for words
For they could never fully describe the beauty and perfectionthat is you
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FleurdeSang
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2005-02-23 15:45:58]
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Re: Words cannot describe...
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 04:00:53 PM AEST
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Time will bring them out in force ... you will see ... they need resting and regrouping periods ... time to focus to develop clarity, altered stated of awareness ... they will be there ... give them time.
Fabulous Stephy ~ and far, far from useless.
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Re: Words cannot describe...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 04:20:31 PM AEST
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| Well it seems to me from this perspective that you have not lost the art...wonderful, just wonderful Stephy |
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Re: Words cannot describe...
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by LadyWynter on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 12:41:16 AM AEST
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This is so powerful, so full of emotion. I can not convey how much I liked this piece.
Somehow I doubt your words could EVER be described as useless. I look forward to reading your other works, as I have it on good authority from Nazzy that you're one of the best. :-)
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Re: Words cannot describe...
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:14:10 PM AEST
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You could make a wilted flower turn in to a rose so beautiful. The magnificent way you have with expression of words.
Fantastic
Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx |
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