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My Halo
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:21:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Seering touch,
A beautiful voice,
I love you so much
I can't believe I'm your choice
Amazing eyes
A loving face
I don't know if I could ever say good bye
If I did I think I might lose my taste
A Wonderful body
And a dirty little mind
Beautiful and noddy
That I can call
All mine
My Halo
That lights my way
And my heart in an outflow
Of words I cannot convey
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-23 21:21:57]
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Re: My Halo
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:24:15 PM AEST
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| Sweet and lovely write. I enjoyed it. Nice work. |
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Re: My Halo
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by heartbroken4ever on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:24:57 PM AEST
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It's beautiful clark and I love it
Thank you babe
Love you
Amber |
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Re: My Halo
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by Arsenic on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:54:42 PM AEST
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| How sweet! Mondo points my friend. |
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Re: My Halo
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:48:34 PM AEST
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| one of your more interesting poems i would have to say...so is the niceness over? |
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Re: My Halo
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:32:59 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, I hope you don't have to say goodbye. Great write Clark :)
--amanda-- |
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Re: My Halo
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by Snuggles on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 08:42:24 PM AEST
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| this poam is so sweet i think its really good |
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