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Aren't You There?
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:37:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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two o'clock
can you see me anymore
3 o'clock
where are you now?
i'm typing just as fast as i can
i'm begging
i'm pleading
to swallow this down
this plan
this exaggerated fable
aren't you there?
were you ever?
was i naive
is there really nothing better
i can't stand to look at these eyes
i'm tired
you know i'm disguised
to be faith but i'm weaker than *****
i'm nothing
and you've got the best of it
that last particle of hope
is dead in your name
is this just a game
hey god,
it's 2 o'clock again
i can't sleep
i'm stirring again
i can't eat i can't drink
maybe i'll think
but you always disappear
when i open my eyes
you always disappear
why do you hide?
hey god
aren't you there?
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Re: Aren't You There?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:15:31 PM AEST
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incrdiable wite here.
Knw thse feelings-n-thoughts well.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Aren't You There?
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by freckle on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:07:43 PM AEST
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| Really good write. Very human and open. Honest too, I've had God disappear on me too at times...or maybe I'm just looking in the wrong direction? Anyway, good write! |
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Re: Aren't You There?
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by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 11:29:31 PM AEST
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you all look at this peice, these empty words and interpret them with such ease. you blindly trust that these words are forming ideas, concepts that you've experienced that you can comprehend. the truth is words are deception at its best and you are all deceived.
~questions are the answers~weepingprophet
p.s. i do appreciate comments this is merely an observation. |
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