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HeartQuake XXXIV
Contributed by
heartquake
on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Close your eyes and walk through the door
Into a dream you've never seen before
Where love runs rampant
Leaving no one left out
A world like that would seem hard to believe
Where love is the only thing that can be seen
Where love runs rampant
Helping to remove all doubt
Love is in the heart of every boy and girl
Just too bad this isn't our world
Where love doesn't run rampant
Where love has run out
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heartquake
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2005-02-23 23:43:17]
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Re: HeartQuake XXXIV
(User Rating: 1 )
by cocoa_butter on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:54:12 AM AEST
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| using the repetitive words with altering meanings works really well in this poem in my opinion. The last two lines are my favourite, its good! well done! |
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