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*Alone*
Contributed by
Artemis03
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:53:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Have you ever felt surrounded but yet..alone?
I have..I feel this way a lot and it hurts.
It feels like im slowly being betrayed and i'm just so blind
I can't see it , but I feel it, it speak clearly in my mind.
Laughing is supopse to be a cure, and I was sure of it.
But laughing just won't help this anymore.
No matter how hard I can try to push it aside
It keeps coming back and it's getting harder to hide.
I see the people I love going off seeming as if I could be foregotten.
Fading from the picture leaving without a trace.
There's nothing left at stake to satisfy the thought.
Nothing measure up to times I fought
these feelings, the torement, the pain.
All in just to remain the same
Alone, no oen there to hear me
hear my cry of insanity.
Alone
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Artemis03
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2005-02-23 23:53:16]
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Re: *Alone*
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 12:36:11 AM AEST
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| Wow, Great Poem.. I can relate~!! Very well writen!! I loved this ~ |
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Re: *Alone*
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:33:15 AM AEST
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I have felt this---withdrawing in a crowd and feeling the utter loneliness of being the only one at a gathering of many. I love the line about fading from the picture. Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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