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A Child-like World
Contributed by
inoc
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:38:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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If adults thought as little children natrually think.
Our lives would be happier and holding grudges would stink.
We would forgive and forget and be happy each day,
If a fellow human made a huge mistake we'd say -hey that's okay!
Holding hands and laughing would be so much fun.
When sliding down the slide after we would skip and run.
Sharing nature items would be treasure out in the sun.
Instead of wanting materialistic items to impress everyone.
Being happy eating ice cream with stickiness everywhere.
Not caring who is watching just eating without a care.
Doesn't matter we are having so much fun why have a fit!
Knowing that a bath will definatly fix it..
When a dispute starts and the pulling of the hair arises.
Five minutes time you dash off to play with kids all different sizes.
Cuddling, reading books from your Grandmas lips.
Instead of gossip and back stabbing when hands are on the hips.
If humans were all like children and feelings come from the heart..
What a good place this world would be from the start!
Maybe let's try and be like children for a bit.
Hey it may be fun and we might make it a good ,habit!
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inoc
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Re: A Child-like World
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by venkat on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 06:51:56 AM AEST
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Wow..this is a really good poem...."If humans were all like children and feelings come from the heart..What a good place this world would be from the start!...Maybe let's try and be like children for a bit"..these lines are touching..how sweet and beautiful advice..
venkat
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Re: A Child-like World
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:51:29 PM AEST
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To bad the world couldent be how uv desribed it! Nice write
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