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Rose Recipe
Contributed by
Ataraxia
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:53:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The days are black and white to me
The only thing left is the bloody debris
Please, I beg, dont make me plea
Ill surrender to you my secret rose recipe
Take an ounce of darkness, forget the light
Without pain it wouldnt come out just right
Stir in some sorrow, mix in secret delight
Set it all on fire, one breath to ignite
Before you add the rest, remember the stars
Without them the recipe wouldnt get very far
Sweet tears of sorrow, an internal scar
And of course the love that was only ours
Freeze the mixture so it turns ice cold
And now let the words of your hatred unfold
Keep it locked away, let it mix and mold
And when you take it out it will be as good as gold
A rose for you, made from my own tears
Created from my sorrow built up for years
I hand this to my love, completely sincere
And now let my soul quietly dissappear
Copyright ©
Ataraxia
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2005-02-24 19:53:16]
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Re: Rose Recipe
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by Moonglow on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:09:44 PM AEST
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| You and me......I guess those kinda days are an average thing for us, eh? Loved your poem, PM me if you ever fel like talkin' 'bout life. |
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Re: Rose Recipe
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:45:00 AM AEST
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Quite uniquely expressed...
Along with the sadness, there's a touch of magic and imagination.
Well-written indeed. |
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