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Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:01:21 PM in AEST
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Slide Cotrelle the man, the myth, the mystery
No one knows were he came from. No one knows where he went.
His music tells the story of a troubled lifetime spent
Running from his demons, chasing dreams he never met
In relative obscurity he passed along his debt
A record once recorded too long before its time
Purchased at a yard sale, and now his debt is mine
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Slide Cotrelle's
It's About Me
_______________________
Well you look at me one time
And we'll let it go at that
But I'll stick you in a heartbeat
If I catch you looking back
See, I live for the moment
And the music that I play
And I couldn't give a rip
If I don't make it one more day
Cuz, It's about me
It's all about me
Curse me seven ways to Sunday
Better pray I don't get free
I learned about debts from the very best
Yes the Devil helped me see
Ain't nuthin else that matters
When it is all about me
I lost my old man
Cuz he traded off his soul
He didn't read the fine print
And he had to pay the toll
So I grew up hard and calloused
Raised up by the street
Music is my family
The world is at my feet
And it's about me
It's all about me
You can cast your curses on me
Hope my knife you never see
I learned about debts from the very best
Yes the Devil set me free
An' there ain't nuthin else that matters
When it is all about me
If I believe you owe me
You can bet I'll make you pay
One way or another
We'll even up again someday
Cuz, it's about me
It's all about me
Curse me seven ways to Sunday
Better pray I don't get free
I learned about debts from the very best
Yes the Devil helped me see
Ain't nuthin else that matters
When it is all about me
It's All About Me
___________________
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There was more to the man than the music
And so much more to the music than the man
The blues were an extension of his life and his love
More than most could ever dream to understand
Slide lived his life through the bending of the strings
And he fretted every note he slid through
While he tried hard to hide what he felt deep inside
Those who listened to the tune surely knew
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:09:11 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Moonglow on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:13:54 PM AEST
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| understandable and yet it talks over broken dreams and hearts. I like it! good write. |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:14:34 PM AEST
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I can still hear this song
the same way I heard it in my head
when I first read it!
--Ghosty |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:23:00 PM AEST
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Just wondering where this one might take me.
Goodnight, Nazzy.
Stitch |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by LadyWynter on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:00:19 PM AEST
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This is really good, Nazzy! It flowed so well, I can almost hear the music. :-) Lot's of emotion behind these words. Just excellent.
LadyWynter |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:37:21 AM AEST
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Oooh, me like this...
I found myself bobbing my head to the 'music' it created...
Great write Nazzy as all of your writes I have seen are.
I look forward to reading more.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by pixie on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:42:50 AM AEST
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bravo, bravo I cant praise you enough on this you two *hugs to both*
pix xx |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:43:04 AM AEST
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BRAVO!!! Y'all cowboys got some soul in ya! lol. LOVE THIS NAZZY!! The brilliant masterminds strike back! Excellent write, cheri!! Can't wait for the next track! I'm lovin' this country music! MORE MORE MORE! lol. A small request from a small voice, lol. All my love, hunny! Forever,
Your friend,
Stephy!! |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:56:22 PM AEST
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WOW.....When will I hear it on the radio?????
Awsome!!!!!!! |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:14:06 AM AEST
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I swear i could hear the music in my ear, and i think that makes you both such great poets. You make your readers what you want us to hear, you project such details that we can just enjoy your creations to a never ending time.
This was really something and im so glad i got to see it.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:56:50 AM AEST
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Bravo! This warrents a standing ovation. I bow to your level of talent and skill; and feel very fortunate to be able to observe and witness your work.
Applause!!!!!
Willofree, Terry |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 07:27:19 PM AEST
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Bravo is right.
Nazzy your too cool.. |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by freckle on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:42:31 PM AEST
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I'm so glad to be able to read more of these...yeah! I love this and Slide is such an intriguing character. Good stuff Nazzy! I'd love to hear it sung!
Carol |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:30:21 PM AEST
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| speechless.....awsome!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:39:25 AM AEST
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Is this supposed to leave me aching, I wonder? Maybe it's just that I'm a fool for those that stuff the pain away deep (not thinking that it'll spit itself out sooner or later - one way or another). And Slide... has been stuffin' it, I think. The music... The Blues... how wonderfully appropriate that it would be so much, you know?
One tiny technical note... I think I'd strike "again" from the last sentence of the second to last stanza. It seemed to make the line a tad long... though.. as I type this I can't help but think I'd change my mind if I heard you sing it. So just ignore me if it seems right to do so. : )
Damn but you two are a fabulous combination! Another awesome piece, Nazzy & Gee. Well, well done!
Lost in it-
~Snemmy~
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Re: Outlaw Blues - Track 2: It's All About Me
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:51:04 PM AEST
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I love how there is the intro, and then the pics are rockin, and the songs are just perfect. I am really diggin this series. You have got me hooked.
"Well you look at me one time
And we'll let it go at that
But I'll stick you in a heartbeat
If I catch you looking back "
"Cuz, it's about me
It's all about me
Curse me seven ways to Sunday
Better pray I don't get free
I learned about debts from the very best
Yes the Devil helped me see
Ain't nuthin else that matters
When it is all about me "
Loves it!!! You should get this published....
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