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When He Makes Me Sad
Contributed by
Red_October
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:01:49 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Hes seen lust in all of me,
and stretched relaxed amid those pieces ~
All the tortured insides and the pain relayed
in words hes read on those same days
Leaked each time my poetry would bleed
Id do anything ever to myself and more
Just to have him for myself, just to fulfill this need
Now I dont know what to do when he makes me sad
He is everything to me
the unobtainable dream ~ when he sings right where my poetry still bleeds
The most empty feeling
Hes a fairy tale that I continue to believe in
And all I need to make it real is one more minute of waiting
while I choke on what is building up inside of me
His name is stuck in my throat
But he is more fake than he is real
Id do anything ever to myself and more
Just to have him standing at my front door
He is everything to me,
so I dont know what to do when he makes me sad
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Re: When He Makes Me Sad
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:11:25 PM AEST
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| Hang in there sweet heart, have you ever thought maybe just maybe your to good for him. Keep that beautiful poetry coming OK? |
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Re: When He Makes Me Sad
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:56:39 PM AEST
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I can certainly relate to this one many times older.
Your inner beauty is remarkable in this write and I agree with wesley.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: When He Makes Me Sad
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:18:57 PM AEST
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wow..this is so beautiful and i got really emotional when i read this..makes me cry...i feel the same way as you do about someone, i feel like you've written about me. when i think back to him, the only person i could ever love, like you all i feel is sadness. thats all i feel too. its been a while now but my emotions r still so real and all my poetry is pretty much about him.
i hope you can be strong and get through this...im still trying but u can do it
take care now |
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Re: When He Makes Me Sad
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:04:25 AM AEST
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| awesome write, well done |
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Re: When He Makes Me Sad
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:36:08 AM AEST
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that was amazing, i am sure hundreds of people can relate to this, i know i can. you are so talented. i envy your skill and empathise with you over the subject matter.
it will pass, time and experience puts wedges between you and your feelings even if you want to stay feeling that way for ever. |
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