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Murder the Sun
Contributed by
dreamer_4_eternity
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Does this dagger show you nothing
Of what I plan to do
Reading your thoughts I see
You think I plan to harm you
But it's not you I plan to hurt
You have nothing to do with this
I will lodge my dagger in the sun
Murder the sun with bliss
I want to see stormclouds
Cover the Earth
Lightning to shatter
And thunder is heard
Rain on a never ending pour
And sad thoughts surround
Lying on a buried wreckage
To tore what I had found
The sun bleeds out a crimson glow
Drowning in deep doubt
That arises from long ago
Murder the sun
With my dagger of ice
Bleeding thoughts a ton
Flowing from thy deep slice
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2005-02-24 22:36:49]
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Re: Murder the Sun
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:44:19 PM AEST
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| wow, this is an amazing piece, dark and i loved reading it |
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Re: Murder the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:29:08 PM AEST
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This is excellent! Its creative and quite powerful. I think my favourite line would have to be "The sun bleeds out a crimson glow" its just a gorgeous image.
Take Care
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Re: Murder the Sun
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:40:46 PM AEST
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wow...im speechless...beautiful...ahhh the beauty of it all....
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