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hate
Contributed by
aprilrose
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:11:21 AM in AEST
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You were the light that surrounded me you were the words i listened to.. How could you tear my life in two?
How could you be so cruel? You were my best friend and i trusted you. How could you turn on me so easily?
How could you not be there for me?Did you even care? Why am i asking myself thes questions i know the answer to?
I loved you i cared about you I never turned my back on you I was always there for you...I covered for you..
I did anything you asked me too....I stuck by you through it all.. I picked you up when you where down...
I never let you fall.. and all you leave me with is one thing hate for you so strong and so true.
I never had to hate until i found you.....
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aprilrose
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2005-02-25 06:11:21]
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Re: hate
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by Stitch on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:51:52 AM AEST
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You have hit this between the eyes. I have felt this hurt. Anger can be healthy in moving past it. Good write.
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Re: hate
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:23:51 AM AEST
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sorry 4 your pain ((((4u)))) kell . . .
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Re: hate
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by dreaming-of-your-love on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:00:40 PM AEST
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very very good keep up the great work
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Re: hate
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by lilsprtygrl21 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 11:31:03 AM AEST
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I've felt this way before and know that it gets you down, but don't think about what you could've done to make it better..you're just waisting your time. Try to move on and find true friends..that's what I'm doing. Keep writing.
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