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Depart my Broken-Heart
Contributed by
concrete_rose
on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:44:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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That unexplained way i feel about you could never consist of the right love poem, or in speech.
The aggressiveness of my controlling mind needs you to feel my words as if you're feeling my touch.
Feel my love as if you're feeling my heart.
My hands ache from loneliness of wanting my heart to be the palm of your hand's new home. Trusting you, wanting you, to carry it with care, for if dropped my soft, coward, heart will once again be lonely.
It begs for you to keep it warm with love, but sadly feels your happy heart does not feel the same.
Your mind may ask how could one's heart develop such strong feelings, without sharing enough words, spending time together, and getting to know each other better.
My fragile, battered, heart is unprepared and scared because it feels that you do not take the time to notice me, sometimes I save up my money to buy a new outfit, and even nicely do my hair, just for you to share, one word, your eyes fail to stare.
So I admire you from a distance. Secretly watch you from afar, wishing that one day my hand can be tightly held by yours as we walk. I pray that the words "I Love You" come out your mouth as you talk.
If only you knew how hot my soul burns for you, your clueless mind would not question, but only destine to be with me.
Each time i look at your heavenly face, my patient eyes grow weary from hope and doubt, so i cry, because i know that my lips will never kiss that angel face.
You may describe how i feel for you obsessive, crazy, or strange, but thats not the worst part, because you don't even know my name.
So from this day on when i see you i close my eyes from gawking, stop my heart from stalking, i turn away and begin walking, knowing that my heart will no longer follow.
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2005-02-25 16:44:37]
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Re: Depart my Broken-Heart
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:48:16 PM AEST
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Awe...well...
I clench my heart tight, it aches with poetic beauty.
This was overly satisfying yet so sad.
I feel for this needing soul, dearly.
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