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The Ghosts
Contributed by
Kuro_Mirai
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:24:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The ghosts, the ghosts They follow me around They stare at me all day And hear my every sound
They whisper in my ear Whats on the other side They tell me in my sleep Exactly how they died
A quiet little giggle To the loudest shrillest scream It's hard to listen every day It's tearing me a my seams
These spirits claim to be here To help me calm my nerves But all they give me is nights full of fear I don't want them here
Please, go away I don't want you hear Please, just stay away Before I lose to fear
The ghosts, the ghosts They follow me around They stare at me all day And hear my every sound
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Kuro_Mirai
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2005-02-25 23:24:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Ghosts
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:20:05 AM AEST (User
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Very well done...if this is a leteral poem...just tell them to go home...that is suppose to work!
Very good imergy though, you caught the emotions very well! |
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Re: The Ghosts
(User Rating: 1 ) by tres_estrellas on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:13:54 AM AEST (User
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I liked that poem. A good write. And I also understand ur situation to some extent, which makes me like it even more! |
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Re: The Ghosts
(User Rating: 1 ) by SylviaWalters on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:29:10 AM AEST (User
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i really like this poem, great rhyming, understandable |
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Re: The Ghosts
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 03:12:54 PM AEST (User
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Nice write. |
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