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pins and needles
Contributed by
russ-dawg
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:02:04 AM in AEST
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My heart is beating but I feel dead
all these thoughts in my head
the pain runs deeper than any cut
all these feelings really hurt
I cant breathe but this is me
if the pain was real it wouldn't be the same.
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Re: pins and needles
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by blacksabbath026 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:10:02 AM AEST
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| short but deep very nicely done |
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Re: pins and needles
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:23:47 AM AEST
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Very meaningful, some of the most memorable poems are short. You did a great job.
--amanda-- |
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Re: pins and needles
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by Freak-of-the-Week on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:08:11 PM AEST
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| When don't you feel evil. :P |
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