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Life fills, but Stammering...! ! !

Contributed by naveen on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 06:26:07 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Fears Fearing, Abosom my heart
Talkin someone, tongues departs

Thoughts heaps abound
Stuttering, my mind forever bound

Loving a damsel
But, how can I tell

My accent's, an irony
Scents, life's agony

Walking a fire, no fears
Talkin entire's, set me in tears

Heart for spanish fries
But my stomach, still cries
S, in spanish fries
Swings Stuttering frights

Life's adventurous, a new day
Sturttering tremendous, tried to hay

Missin, when fluent sometimes
Stuttering in mind's affluent rhymes

Determination now a rife
Stuttering helped, a new life

Rocked, a serene heart
Tought, how face extremes apart.

Copyright © naveen ... [ 2005-02-26 06:26:07]
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Re: Life fills, but Stammering...! ! ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 08:53:29 AM AEST
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This struck me as being well written, although some of the rhymes are bizarre to read over again - its eccentricity endears itself to me in lieu of the magickal originality that comes along with it.

I commend you on sharing your valuable perspective here.

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