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LOVE DANCE:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:07:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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Dance with me to the music of our heart.
moving to its beat is a humble start.
all i sea and feel is love pure spark,
to hold and kiss you is a great start .
the world is your if i had my way,
because of your love i'll never stray
strong and hard,smood and good
we move together like true lovers should.
embrace with passion to no avail.
love sure put wind in our sail.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-02-26 16:07:59]
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Re: LOVE DANCE:
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:17:47 PM AEST
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| that was a very good poem, i mean it tells exactly what true love is like keep writing~chrissy |
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Re: LOVE DANCE:
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:26:02 PM AEST
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nice flow very beautiful
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Re: LOVE DANCE:
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:28:51 PM AEST
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Awwwwwwww! this is so sweet!!! I love the flow in this poem. Perhaps there are some grammatical errors such as sea= see and the world is yours ... The punctuation is a bit odd too.
Apart from that... I love this poem! So cute!
Anne |
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