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''The Rebuilding of Me''
Contributed by
puranic_mantra
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:14:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As the pieces of my life fall around me,
In kaleidescopic colors,
And my hopes begin to falter,
I breathe you into me.
As my universe is spinning beneath me,
I grab hold of your hands,
And the fear in me...subsides.
The world I knew, I now know not,
For its foundations are tumbling down,
But yet, I know, that with you with me,
I can rebuild this place again.
Christopher Ray Roan
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2005-02-26 17:14:33]
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Re: ''The Rebuilding of Me''
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by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:33:21 PM AEST
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| Beautiful words... Keep the Belief..... these words can be your mantra.... Believe in yourself.... Well Done |
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Re: ''The Rebuilding of Me''
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by Jane_Doe on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:35:04 PM AEST
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sweet poem. I liked it a lot.
--Jane Doe-- |
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Re: ''The Rebuilding of Me''
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:10:30 PM AEST
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It made me go awwww. This poem shows a lot of love!
Anne :) |
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