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All I Have Left
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:28:59 PM in AEST
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Not caring, just giving up
Im such a dissapooinment, why bother, i hate who i am
As the good self esteem, built up by her efforts
Sorry to see and feel them crumble in a second
Turning off emotions, I just dont want to feel
Why whenever i heal, feel something real
When i get something great that makes me feel alive
Im worth something
Its always taken away
Im ment to be alone
I hate you you dyke, you freak
I hate you god, There is no god
Ill be forever damned anyways, thats how it always is
How can i live with this unbearable pain again
Last was attepted suicide
Icant do that to the one i love
Im foreced to live
Now with that blade i broke that promise to my love
Im so sorry. you dont know how much their words hurt me
Arguing over me, crying over me, yelling at me
Tearing me apart everyday
Im tired of talking
Im tired of crying all day and all night
alone in my room, tired of cutting
Of hating myself
Tired of living , being in this hell
So my heart and soul belong to you my love
For here in my place i am eternaly dead
Without your voice, without your beautiful face to keep me feeling
Becoming emotionalyless is all i have left
So keep my happiness and joy
Keep my hear and sould, keep everything good about me
All darkness and bad stay here
Until we meet and i am free
put them back in my lifeless body
The darkness will fade, ill be free again
Until then im going to endure this pain
with the blade by my side, thats all i have
And the love of my rachel
Does shes still love me? want to be with me?
She's all i have left, my love
Ill be yours forever
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2005-02-26 21:28:59]
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Re: All I Have Left
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by MajesticPoet on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:35:35 PM AEST
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This was one of the deepest emotional writes I have read in a long time. The struggles you convay in this poem are amazing. I can almost picture you in this poem with the blades next to you. YOu pain a great picture. Keep your head up. Love will keep your life worth everything you want. Keep up the great writting.
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Re: All I Have Left
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:45:59 PM AEST
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| some of your verses need a bit of cleaning up, but over all this poem was very good. in the beginning i could really identify with it. |
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