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Drunken Sky, This Is Me
Contributed by
JacobsKK
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:12:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I think the sky was drunk today.
It seemed so dark, it seemed so gray.
And here I am thinkin my lifes hard.
Scared to go places, afraid I wont get far.
I feel like everyones leaning on me.
I keep tryin to be what others tell me to be.
My parents keep trying to hold my hand.
They want me to be something big; something grand.
But right now, Im still falling; overcome with despair.
Reaching out for people who arent even there.
The guy that I love did not run away.
He left because of me, Because I didnt stay.
All I have now are my family and friends.
Their names in my circle, cuz circles never end.
Yes, the sky was drunk today.
It cried millions of tears that fell my way.
Heres to the feelings Ill have forever.
And heres to my heart thats been taped back together.
This ones for my girls who stuck with me this far.
This ones for the drunken skys reachable stars.
Jacob, if youre listening; Baby, I still love you.
Please say that a part of you still loves me too.
Drunk sky, do not worry. Hangovers arent that bad.
Cry on my if you want to, I know that youre sad.
Its not good that you havent cried for many days.
So just cry on me; we need rain anyways.
God take the wind and the rain, send it all to the soil.
Calm the blood in my veins if it ever starts to boil.
Hold on to my family wherever they may be.
Hold on to my friends, and all thats left of me.
Drunk sky, I dont deserve it,
But pull me out of this hole.
Can you hear me? Will you help me?
Please save my soul
Copyright ©
JacobsKK
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2005-02-27 01:12:23]
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Re: Drunken Sky, This Is Me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:50:17 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy
I know how life can get cha down but hang in there. |
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Re: Drunken Sky, This Is Me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:45:41 AM AEST
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| wow, this is so beautiful, well done |
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Re: Drunken Sky, This Is Me
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:41:15 AM AEST
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I just loved the way you personified the sky.. Well done...
Jenni |
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Re: Drunken Sky, This Is Me
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by NoHoldingBack on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:14:54 AM AEST
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| Wow...That's exactly what came out of my mouth. Just thought you should hear it. |
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