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Waiting out the Darkness
Contributed by
b_rand
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 02:03:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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its dreams that bring the only light
cant tell if its day or night
the oxygen is running tight
and darkness is around
its cramped and hard to move at all
not even enough to crawl
surrounded by four wooden walls
this home is not a house
it smells of dirt and reeks of fear
i sense the end is getting near
not sure how long ill last in here
if help wont come about
but hunger grows and so does weakness
muscles atrophy while i speak this
im giving up, my mind is speachless
im tired of screaming out
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Re: Waiting out the Darkness
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:46:56 AM AEST
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very good dark write, flowed very well
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