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Hidden and Forbidden
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 02:57:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You look at me with distain,
Your resentment running deep within you.
I can see your spiteful words form,
As you get ready to express your abhorrence.
Every bit of you reflects your spite,
I am an anathema to you.
I watch as you deride my attempts to be civil,
Detesting my faade of not caring.
But you are unrelenting and despising,
And your repugnance tears me to peices.
They all think that I have similar animosity,
That I hold you as an antagonist.
Even I thought you an enemy,
Though I'm shattered by your hostility.
Our oppositions are expected,
And our aversion is quite necessary.
Neither you nor I could cease to show our eschewal,
Though our enmity is faked.
But looking in your seemingly malevolent eyes,
Sometimes makes me forget the truth.
They may have forced our hatred,
But they cannot control our love.
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2005-02-27 02:57:53]
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Re: Hidden and Forbidden
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by bernard on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:34:43 AM AEST
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| This sounds like a does he love me does he not. Good poem with flow I like it bernard. |
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Re: Hidden and Forbidden
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:55:21 AM AEST
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A powerful write, in which, you have expressed through your choice of wording...
You must be a person of extremes??
As it is observed by your use of contrariety...between love and hate.
An interesting muse. |
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Re: Hidden and Forbidden
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:48:20 AM AEST
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| Another well expressed write. |
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Re: Hidden and Forbidden
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 08:01:50 AM AEST
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a very strong and well expressed write,
pix xx |
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Re: Hidden and Forbidden
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:47:33 AM AEST
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| well written hidden and forbidden love keep writing ~chrissy |
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