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Numb.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:42:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im numb.
But Times moving on.
And its turning me dumb.
And my sharp blades blunt.
And its left me numb.
Im numb.
The emotional bullet shot through the gun
And it killed some one.
Some one I loved
But now shes gone
The depression won.
Shes gone
I had to sit this test.
And it made me just break down.
I was too dumb for it.
Just like Im too dumb for any thing now
So I drew dead bodies on the paper,
And wrote what my brother called me as a little girl.
And I wrote how much Im a failure.
And that Im close to ending it now
I didnt think hed worry,
I thought he wouldnt care.
Its funny how things twisted.
Its ironic how he cares
I DONT need him here!
I dont need his words, his stares
His glares
I only wrote it, coz it had to come out.
Before I erupted, and began to smack and shout
Im numb.
One of my teachers said I was dumb
Then COOPER said Im a problem child
And I lost it with the runt.
He said Im very negative
And that I wont be any thing in life
And I went ape,
Coz he dont know how hard I fight!
Lifes an endless corridor,
Echoing in the storm.
My wrists are healing scars
But my world is really torn
And its left me numb.
Dumb.
And feeling like some, pathetic no one
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Re: Numb.
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by LevyMetal on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:56:29 AM AEST
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| I liked this write very much. It was very honest and probably diffcult to compose but yet it flows so evenly. The repetitive of the words "numb" and "dumb" kept me interested in how you came up with a creative way to use them in the next stanza. You rhyme really well too. Thanks for sharing-i really appreciated it. great job! |
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Re: Numb.
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:36:45 PM AEST
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rest assured, you are far from 'dumb'. if you could not fit their mold, perhaps the defect lies within their mold. most schools are just meat processing plants...they are not equipped to deal with thinking. shame, 'cuz they miss out on so much, though.
good write.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Numb.
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by guiltycircles on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:19:54 AM AEST
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| mate this is so amazing...i know that numbness and i appreciate how much you fight....if u feel like letting everything out, send me a msg... |
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