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HURT-FULL :
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:00:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Have you ever seen the expression of death on my face.
that was disappointment ,I felt for what you displayed
I trusted you and I still do.
to catch you with another,"o I was so blue."
it hurt so bad,its like twisteing a rope,
so tightly twisted it finnaly broke.
But my love for you never flop,
i'll forgive you ,
if you promise to stop.
I don't know if I can handle this unforgetable stuff.
but because I TRUELY love you, I will try ,
isn't that enought?
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-02-27 11:00:56]
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Re: HURT-FULL :
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:17:52 AM AEST
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a painful write from your heart,
pix xx |
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Re: HURT-FULL :
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:08:16 PM AEST
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| very nice write....precise...and hopeful.. |
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