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A Sylvan Canopy
Contributed by
kewter
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:57:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Once in a blue moon
it worked. Was the scenery
an omen that was overlooked?
Should we have paid more attention
to the omnipresent nature
telling us our chances of survival
were few...
Or are we stronger
overcoming her foreboding signs
telling us only this once
We moved past that night
of the second glowing moon
on the damp grass - understars
We moved past that night
your hand slowly enclosing on mine
continuing that walk
through the sylvan canopy
Were we wrong?
Copyright ©
kewter
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2005-02-27 13:57:13]
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Re: A Sylvan Canopy
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by heartquake on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 02:03:42 PM AEST
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| great poem... i'm in love with big words lol... so that made it much better.... but it would've been great without them too.... i liked the story it told... what i got from it was an empowering situation wandering through the forest, not looking back and such.... good job |
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Re: A Sylvan Canopy
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:56:48 PM AEST
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I love the feel of this. I love the sadness of the questions and the mood...the overwhelming sense of futility that has not quite overcome the sliver of hope.
Stitch |
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