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À La Belle Étoile
Contributed by
heartquake
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:57:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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A beautiful star so very far
But it seems in reach with you in my arms
From the start you stole my heart
But I trust in you not to tear it apart
Come with me so you will see
All the things you mean to me
You are beauty you're a reason I breathe
And like this night you will forever be lovely
You and I under this beautiful sky
The only stars worth looking at are your eyes
If we were to die I wouldn't mind
Because I already know what an angel looks like
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2005-02-27 13:57:48]
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Re: À La Belle Étoile
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:39:03 PM AEST
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| very nice poem indeed. i liked the ending. i like the originality of this poem in some places, in other places it lacked it the same creativity. some of your rhymes seemed a bit forced, but your overall piece made up for that. |
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