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Contributed by
haligh
on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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too young to be committed
too young to even care
too young to feel the things i feel
too young to shed these tears
do you love her the way you said you loved me?
and do you think she's perfect as can be?
"no no no, i'm just seventeen
don't want to be your everything
too dependant on our love
too dependant" he had said
so hurt me for another girl?
and leave me all alone
a broken heart, an empty soul
but that's okay, 'cause your happy
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haligh
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2002-12-14 20:00:00]
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Re: No title
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by OreO on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:21:10 AM AEST
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Wow this poem is full of "facing reality" It sounds in this one that you know somthing about what you really want in life...where it says no no no im just seventeen, don't want to be your everything....ahh tha's beautiful....and in the very end where it says hurt me for another girl?? and ended it stating that he's happy.....as if tha's all that matters was his happiness....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
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