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Listen
Contributed by
BrownHon3yXXX
on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:36:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I listen to the ocean below
I study the rythm of it's flow
The tides are sometimes low
But high they can also go
I listen to the voices
That talk Inside my head
Then that's when I relize
The extacy wants me dead
I listen to the noises
Of the monsters that are chasing me
I listen to my loved ones
That have surrounded the scene
I listen to them say
That help is on the way
But I just shake my head
And say no instead
I listen to them scream
As I jump into the stream
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2005-02-27 17:36:08]
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Re: Listen
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:14:22 PM AEST
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this poem seemed very broad...you have a lot ur thinking about...but overall it was a well written piece...i know exactly what you're going thru if u ever need to talk im here
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Re: Listen
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:37:22 PM AEST
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| excellent piece. i especially liked the beginning. |
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