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Wash Over Me
Contributed by
freckle
on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:09:21 PM in AEST
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Wash over me
and cleanse me,
my weaken limbs
lean in, to feel
the water
wash over me
Frail, my strength
depleted,
I stand and sigh
Releasing my spirit
beneath the comforting flow
Wash over me
renew
my strength,
my peace
of mind
I hold onto
hope
I am beaten
but not broken
Wash over me
The spray
so satifying
Washes away
the dirt of my being,
my tired thoughts
Calm settles
amidst the drops
wash over me
and leave me clean
Ready to face
another tomorrow
Carol
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freckle
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2005-02-27 19:09:21]
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by MLCstar on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:17:50 PM AEST
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| Simple and deep. Such a poem allows all sorts of people to relate to it. I only wish you had provided an explanation so I could confirm whether the meaning is similar to what I felt from it. Or are you pulling a Hemmingway on us all? |
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:22:03 PM AEST
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very nice poem comforting thoughts wishing
u all the kindness u deserve, u write so well
like your style . . . Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by --skoTch-- on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:25:20 PM AEST
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| I really like it, it's...calming...kind of something to look forward to. |
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by hooray_its_jen on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:44:51 PM AEST
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I love how you make each line so short.
Great write! |
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:27:57 PM AEST
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| i agree with the alcoholic drink. (sorry i couldnt resist =]) good poem carol. the repetion nature would be good for a song. |
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 07:14:50 PM AEST
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Thars nuthin like tha refreshin scent of Irish Spring in tha mornin, or a Zest y shower ... especially if ya watch commercials. Me, I'd rather experience this feeling in a tropical waterfall on a daily basis. If I could find the way to do it, I would so be there. I like that one Carol ... It kinda says ... Goodmorning !!!
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:54:43 PM AEST
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Oh, this is my prayer. I love this. I feel this...I have said this...not exactly in these words, but surely the feeling behind them has sprung from my very pores at time. Oh, this is really nice.
Stitch |
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Re: Wash Over Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:56:09 AM AEST
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| Such hope & strength in your words.... A 10!!! |
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