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I Saw That Old Man Today
Contributed by
MMISS
on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:32:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I saw that old man today
He still looks, then turns away
It's so strange how he appears
when your memory is near
I still see his empty face
as I drive up to our place
He wants to go in there
but nobody inside to care
Maybe I should ask him this
Will I ever cease to miss
the love in my memory
or will I die in my grief
I saw that old man again today
This time he did'nt turn away
Now I know why he appears
He was my reflection in the mirror
Copyright ©
MMISS
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2005-02-27 19:32:01]
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Re: I Saw That Old Man Today
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by --skoTch-- on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST
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| What made you write that? |
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Re: I Saw That Old Man Today
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 08:46:01 PM AEST
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yeah-n- I saw the ole lady.
a masterpeice.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: I Saw That Old Man Today
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:22:48 PM AEST
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| that was a bit more original than some of the endings ive seen about the same topic. great poem too, as more substance than most that write about this also. |
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Re: I Saw That Old Man Today
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by sojourner on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:04:35 AM AEST
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nice poem,
When love, witheres and dies, the true face of pain you can not hide.
sojourner, |
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Re: I Saw That Old Man Today
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by Sensommar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:28:48 AM AEST
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| Yes - some time when we see ourselves we want to denay it , we dont want anything to do with it This time you stopped to have a closer look A well written and interesting poem |
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Re: I Saw That Old Man Today
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by longago on
Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 05:37:24 PM AEST
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| lovely, full of saddness but beautiful nonetheless |
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