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Dead Serene awaits a thunderstorm...
Contributed by
naveen
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:07:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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People says, am drowsy
A stasis, Future gloomy
World's given a Fire
Needed Ice
Just asked for love
You thought thrice
Soft-Serene heart Agony's, totally shocked
Extreme envies, heart forever rocked
Straned Aloof, an orphan
Loneliness proofs, loves isn't for fun
Yes am drowsy, a stasis, a retarded ship
A lull, before storm
dead serene
Before a thunderstorm
Years am bearing your tides
A lull swearing, a transformation belies
Fearing away my fears
Life's a great learner be no tears
Yes am drowsy, a lull a stasis
Longer a wine ferments
Turns aromatic, tasteful, more redolents
Envy, hatred flooded a life
A ray of optimism, still a rife
Destiny sets me extirpated
Determined am
palm routes renacted
Your speculations, edgy comments
Puns meant, doesn't torments
Fire, fire in the heart's crust
Lava's burning, set the valcano burst
Quakes set the world's apart
Will rock, shock, the envies depart
naveen kumar
Copyright ©
naveen
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2005-02-28 01:07:50]
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Re: Dead Serene awaits a thunderstorm...
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by sojourner on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:06:27 PM AEST
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very interesting poem,deep read,you have a good vocabulary of words in your mind,I had to look a couple of them up to help me understand your poem.
p.s. vol not val.
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Re: Dead Serene awaits a thunderstorm...
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by remote on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:03:11 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is a great write. Keep it up. |
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