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Roman Punishment
Contributed by
sinned
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Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 07:57:06 AM in AEST
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Prisoners were nothing more than scum Whipped and beaten until they succumb Bound and dragged through dirty streets Thorns pressed through swollen cheeks Thorns piercing through a tongue Thorns driven into the gum Beads of lashes cutting deep Prisoners were deprived of sleep Dung of the bowls prisoners were forced to eat To drink vinegar and gall none too sweet Questioned before Ceaser or guard Most often guilt assured Bound dragged back to some cold cell To this Jesus suffered at man's will Are You king of the Jews Thou hast sadith haven't you Things done we cannot famthom For this reason Jesus come Came to this world of His making To bare our sin through suffering and flogging Spit and fire upon His skin For us our souls to win All for the sin of Adam and Eve That we may believe The world made perfect and all was good Until man decided to be like God To You God Jesus Spirit of love Of everything You are above I dedicate to You this very poem I hope to worship You forever now and when You call me home
Sinned
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Re: Roman Punishment
(User Rating: 1 ) by MLCstar on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:40:40 PM AEST (User
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You cannot go wrong with such a perfect subject. I think you could have written it better, but God still will appreciate the acknowlegement. |
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