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I STILL HEAR AND SEE YOU
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 04:46:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I WAS HURTING INSIDE
WHEN YOU WERE KILLED
NOBODY KNOWS HOW I REALLY FELT
I GUESS CAUSE LIFE IS A CARD GAME
BUT WHY WASN'T YOURS EVENLY DEALT?
ALL YOUR LIFE YOU SAID
YOU HAD BEEN LIVING ON BORROWED TIME
IT'S FUNNY, CAUSE I FEEL THE SAME WAY
AND I CAN'T GET IT OFF MY MIND
I REMEMBER WHEN YOU TOLD ME THAT WE HAD TO MAKE IT OUT THE HOOD
EVEN THOUGH YOUR GONE BRO
YOU LIVE THROUGH ME
SO ITS ALL GOOD
YOU USE TO SAY, "GREG I'LL BE THERE IF YOU EVER GET INTO ANOTHER FIGHT."
I CAN'T EVER FORGIVE MYSELF FOR NOT BEING THERE FOR YOU
THAT NIGHT
I HAVE SO MUCH HATE FLOWING THROUGH MY VEINS
THEN I'D HEAR YOU IN THE BACK OF MY MIND
SAYING
"LET IT GO MAN"
I'VE DRIVEN BY YOUR HOUSE
HOPING I'D SEE YOU OUTSIDE
I JUST QUIT GOING
CAUSE I REALIZED IT WASN'T 1995
MY EYES WOULD START TO WATER
BUT AGAIN YOU SAID
"IT WILL BE ALRIGHT"
WHEN I SLEPT
I SAW YOU IN MY DREAMS
YOU TOLD ME TO TAKE LIFE FOR WHAT ITS WORTH
CAUSE NOT EVERYTHING IS WHAT IT SEEMS
WELL BRO
I TOOK YOUR ADVICE AND I LEFT THE GAME
I JUST WISH YOU WERE HERE
CAUSE I KNOW YOU WOULD HAVE DONE THE SAME
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THUGGIN4REAL
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2005-02-28 16:46:00]
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Re: I STILL HEAR AND SEE YOU
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by MeLeE on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:01:04 PM AEST
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| I really like ur poem....srry 4 da loss |
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Re: I STILL HEAR AND SEE YOU
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by dancingcatz on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:00:27 AM AEST
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| oh my goodness, this is a truly beautiful heart felt poem, full of emotion and bursting with sadness for your loss. it has been so neatly and carefully crafted and moulded into shape, i'm sorry for your loss but im sure that writing this masterpiece helped with a small part of it. |
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Re: I STILL HEAR AND SEE YOU
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:51:32 PM AEST
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| a road traveled and wish we could go back somehow and maybe fix it. A time I know that is very painful in your life. I heard a story from a lady once. Her and her buddies were in a car and they crashed. She went into heaven and was pulled back by her mom crying. Her friend died. She said why her. why not me. Another woman whom they were talking to said.. IT WASNT YOUR TIME. The day we were born we have a exact time to die. Ones that pass on like a few of my family members will be waiting when I enter and never have to say good bye again. I feel your heart and pain when I read you poetry. I may not understand fully what you been through. But keep writing. you touch others... |
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Re: I STILL HEAR AND SEE YOU
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by Sinned on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:51:01 PM AEST
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Thuggin4real
Do you have to shout your poems.I don't think so,why capatiapize everything ? You write very well and express feelings well.
Are you a blak man or just trying to sound black ? I live in a mixed neighorhood near Detroit. No I am white,but to me people are just that "People"
I'd hate to die and have God say "Hey man how we's all do'en" :)
thanks for your comment on my poem.Your Cold Cold Heart.
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