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Good-Bye
Contributed by
miss_erika
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It's finally that time That I realize you're no longer mine I'm ready to move on I don't see why it took this long To see that you're no good for me That with you isn't where I want to be Like a game you played with my feelings After all the pain, I'm finally healing No longer will I be your toy You may be 14, but you're still a boy A silly, immature child Hormones out there, running wild I'm 13 and looking for more Not the same weak girl I was before No longer will I run to you Whenever you want me to No more sitting beside the phone Being let down and feeling alone I can't, I won't, I refuse To live my life being used But I really think you should know This time, I'm really letting go So when you get that feeling Don't call me with your pleading I won't be here waiting I moved on, my love for you is fading Good-Bye Trever, it's been and interesting ride I won't let you bring me down anymore, I'm letting you go with pride You were my first love, but now you're in the past I promise, you won't be my last
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Re: Good-Bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by high_on_duct_tape on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:51:04 PM AEST (User
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Excellent write! your friend jade should join ypdc, I want to hear more! |
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Re: Good-Bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by jillian_phan on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:13:49 PM AEST (User
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that was very good, very very good, for only 13 and able to write out her emotions like so, wow, that was a great write, not even 17 year olds can be intuned enough to get that point.... |
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