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I just want to say...
Contributed by
gothichollie
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I tried my best to please you
But my emotions get in the way
I want so much to love you
I want you to forever Stay
But I dont know what i am..
I dont know what i've become..
Because i work so hard to please you..
But i cant.. I just feel numb
Why cant i just tell you
How great you make me feel?
How you stole my heart
When it was made out of steel
How easily I crumble
When you're not around
How my heart needs you
But i dont even make a sound
My fears are all too great
so I just hold it in
You'll never know how i feel
Even if it is a Sin.
Copyright ©
gothichollie
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2005-03-01 17:28:08]
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Re: I just want to say...
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by darkcutterBree on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:15:00 PM AEST
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| great job..keep it up! |
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Re: I just want to say...
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:42:49 PM AEST
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| Great poem Hollie, u never cease to amaze me. |
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