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Sunrise 1.1
Contributed by
J_Ganey
on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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With moist sand between our toes, shifting with our weight
Sharing soft kisses, becoming butterflies in the wind
The sweetness of honey upon your breath
Like incense burned for some distant god, far away.
The innocent tone of your voice, mixing with the waves
As the sea breeze playfully runs through your hair
The gentleness of the tide, pulling us out to sea
The houses lining the shore, now a distant memory
Glaring upward, from our spot in the sand
Each star, a lifetime weve waited for this moment
While waiting for our first sunrise, counting seconds
10, 9, 8, 7,the sky turns red in anticipation
6,5,. We lose count because we were locked in a passionate
kiss.
That would make Hollywood beg for a better scene
But all isnt lost because we know well always have tomorrow
So we dont regret missing this precious date
The first time the sun rose for us
Copyright ©
J_Ganey
... [
2002-12-15 08:00:00]
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Re: Sunrise 1.1
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by OreO on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:39:00 AM AEST
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This gave me chillbumps upon chillbumps....not many poems do that.....thanks for sharing this one it has such a beautiful vision and is very captivating...
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