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Hotel Room -or- The Long Goodbye
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:48:32 PM in AEST
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Gideon's bible on the stand,
Dear John letter in my hand,
smoke and liquor fills the room,
as I am regretting you.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2005-03-01 19:48:32]
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Re: Hotel Room -or- The Long Goodbye
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:00:54 PM AEST
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| That was a cool little poem! Short, but created a great picture in my mind. Awsome! |
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Re: Hotel Room -or- The Long Goodbye
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:16:03 PM AEST
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| oh wow.i didnt know that from such a small poem and such few words you can create such a strong image in my mind. i think this is great! powerful for such a small poem. def. encourage you to keep writing! |
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Re: Hotel Room -or- The Long Goodbye
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 12:31:21 AM AEST
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| Yeah this little gem, had a ton to say. I felt so much sadness. Much peace to you. Good write. |
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