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Smile Like You Mean It
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Smile Like You Mean It...
And Stop Pretending Like You Want To Be With Me Please,
Stop Wasting Me,
I Have Little To Give...
I Can't Do Much...
I Can't Say Much...
I Sing Quietly For The Deaf...
And Give Flowers To The Poor...
You See Me Walking,
But Do You Trip And Fall Over The Cracks...
Don't Give Me A Rose That'll Die...
Don't Give Me Tears That Won't Dry...
And Don't Give Me Words That Won't Heal...
I Bless The Peeling Layers Of Your Skin...
Your New And Undying...
Untrustworthy And Unreliable...
I Hate Your Thoughts...
I Hate Your Beliefs...
Your Tricks And Devices...
I Can't Look It's Killing Me...
Now Smile Like You Mean It...
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2005-03-01 20:19:57]
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Re: Smile Like You Mean It
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:22:24 PM AEST
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defitnetly like this piece. especially where you said
"I Sing Quietly For The Deaf...
And Give Flowers To The Poor..."
and i also really like how you ended it with how you started it. i think you did a great job here. keep writing. |
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Re: Smile Like You Mean It
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by the_mouse_that_roared on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:34:45 PM AEST
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I really liked the emotion in this. I'm not sure about every word starting with a capital but I guess that's the writers choice. Good job
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Re: Smile Like You Mean It
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by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:29:07 PM AEST
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| Interesting word choice even though i dont agree with all of it. But i like the wording |
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Re: Smile Like You Mean It
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by Nobrainer on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 01:15:28 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed your poem, good exspresion of emotion, the way you phrased some of the stuff was interesting like- "i bless the peeling layers of your skin" ...good job
~jess |
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Re: Smile Like You Mean It
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by Trisha on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:46:24 AM AEST
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| I liked your poem and I joy reading it |
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