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tears of the heart
Contributed by
the_mouse_that_roared
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:29:43 PM in AEST
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Like a whisper at night
in the dark, out of sight
silently, fall the tears of a heart
not a single sound makes
as it quietly breaks
from the pain caused when worlds come apart
they don't stream down the face
leave no trail or trace
you can't wipe them away with your hand
it's the weeping inside
for a dream that has died
over reasons it can't understand
Watch it now as it cries
listen close for the sighs
you will never be able to tell
of the agony felt
or the dirty deeds dealt
though it's living its own private hell
hearts will hide what they feel
and deny what is real
so that "one" other heart doesn't know
how 'til it beats its last
it will dwell on the past
hiding love that it never dare show
TMTR
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Re: tears of the heart
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:49:07 PM AEST
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This is good stuff. You could clean up your capitalization some, but definitely good stuff.
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Re: tears of the heart
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:23:13 PM AEST
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Very fine anology of life.
We all try to hide our tears-n-pain.
A masterpeice.
huggs,
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Re: tears of the heart
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 12:31:45 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, TMTR (love the user name by the way)!
This is a great first post. A rather accurate reflection of how it can be to let go, I think. (Do we ever really?) I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Grab a chair, stay a bit....
Happy to have stumbled across your page,
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