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What Should Be
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What Should Be
Hateful with spite
In this loveless life
Infected and intoxicated
With delusions
Of what should be
Fixated with reality
By what will never be
Anger and resentment
Reign supreme
In a malcontent
With no dreams
What should be
Is a dream
For those with need
What will never be
Is a nightmare
For those wishing to be free
I die infected from reality
But being dreamless
Was the real misery
In this emptiness
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-03-01 21:40:30]
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Re: What Should Be
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:44:23 PM AEST
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Real philosiphical wright Jen...very well done as normal...I like the way the rythem and idea of the poem flows...great job..
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Re: What Should Be
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:55:05 PM AEST
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A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: What Should Be
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:41:56 AM AEST
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Couldn't have made it make sense or relate to this world any better. Did that make sense?
Take Care,
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Re: What Should Be
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 09:03:34 AM AEST
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Jen this was really good, i have missed your work and this just shows how much im missing out a lot .
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: What Should Be
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:56:04 AM AEST
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tragic but beautifly stated sorry 4 your pain . .
Dorian Chambers |
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